A silver faucet
Bursting with a warm
Stream of clear liquid
Saturates
My dry, straw-like hair.
I add
Bubbly shampoo
And
Creamy conditioner
That lathers
Into a cleaning frenzy.
The mixture froths
And all the bad stuff
That smells like
Stinky socks
Washes down the drain
With a greedy gulp.
As a fluffy towel
Dries my hair
To wet dampness,
Daily routine
Wakes me up
And
Refreshes me,
Getting me ready
For a new day’s
Life experience.

The idea for “A Silver Faucet” came from a request for a poem about a favorite daily routine or activity. My insight is to wash away my troubles and clean my soul by the simple act of washing my hair. I enjoyed writing this poem as it is fun to weave words and say something so simple in a creative way. Some of the techniques I used include sound alliteration (examples: “greedy gulp”, and “stinky socks”), images or metaphors (example: “a silver faucet bursting with a warm stream of clear liquid” representing bountiful blessings showering down from spirit), and my structure or focus was cleansing life, mind and hair. The perspective that I had was ‘out with the old, in with the new’. It is how I prepare to greet the day everyday.
I like your poetry Karin! Thanks so much!
Margo
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Thanks for reading it. It is fun to share with you.
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I like your poetry … it brings pictures to my mind
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Karen, you have a lot of energy and you let it flow through your poems.
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That is a good analogy for this poem.
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